Wednesday, October 01, 2008

Rosa Saves the Day, Chapters 2-4

After writing chapter 1, AJ decided to change the name of her protagonist to Rosa instead of calling her AJ.

She has come up with this all by herself and written it down. The only thing I've changed is fixing spelling and capitalization errors.

Chapter 2.

On and on Rosa went, farther and farther away from home. That night she had to sleep in a field. She covered herself up with flowers and made a pillow with flowers.

The next morning, Rosa woke up bright and early. She made a breakfast of strawberries, flowers, sunflower seeds, and dandelion greens. Then she traveled on.

Chapter 3.

On Rosa traveled, on and on and on.

By lunch time Rosa was in a forest. She stopped to rest. For lunch Rosa ate wild blackberries, sap, roots, twigs and bark.

Then Rosa took a nap.

Chapter 4.

After her nap, Rosa was refreshed. She jumped on her bike and rode to the hills. When she got there it was dinner time. Rosa ate a few June berries. Then Rosa made her bed and went to sleep.

She woke up the next morning to hear howling. She looked behind a bush to find a puppy! He barked and wagged his tail.

Rosa laughed and said, "I think I will name you Snoopes."

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Saturday, September 20, 2008

AJ Saves the Day, Chapter 1

By AJ, age 7.

Once upon a time, on a beautiful fall day, where a cool breeze was blowing, a big bunch of children were playing outside.

One of them rushed to the swing. She jumped on and said, "Start me! Start me high!"

Her mommy did it. It was delightful.

She could see over the fence. She saw a car drive into the neighbor's garage. A mean looking man stepped out. He walked inside and came out carrying a baby and a big bag. He got in his car and drove away.

AJ jumped off the swing. She ran inside, pulled on her super-suit, and ran out the front door. She jumped on her bike and rode off.

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