Wednesday, October 01, 2008

Rosa Saves the Day, Chapters 2-4

After writing chapter 1, AJ decided to change the name of her protagonist to Rosa instead of calling her AJ.

She has come up with this all by herself and written it down. The only thing I've changed is fixing spelling and capitalization errors.

Chapter 2.

On and on Rosa went, farther and farther away from home. That night she had to sleep in a field. She covered herself up with flowers and made a pillow with flowers.

The next morning, Rosa woke up bright and early. She made a breakfast of strawberries, flowers, sunflower seeds, and dandelion greens. Then she traveled on.

Chapter 3.

On Rosa traveled, on and on and on.

By lunch time Rosa was in a forest. She stopped to rest. For lunch Rosa ate wild blackberries, sap, roots, twigs and bark.

Then Rosa took a nap.

Chapter 4.

After her nap, Rosa was refreshed. She jumped on her bike and rode to the hills. When she got there it was dinner time. Rosa ate a few June berries. Then Rosa made her bed and went to sleep.

She woke up the next morning to hear howling. She looked behind a bush to find a puppy! He barked and wagged his tail.

Rosa laughed and said, "I think I will name you Snoopes."

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2 Comments:

Blogger CalvaryGirl said...

GREAT job A.J.!!

5:35 AM  
Blogger Becci said...

I loved the story... so cute!

8:24 PM  

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